Five Planets
Five planets share the evening sky tonight --this chance, they say, will last a week or soand comes again twelve years from now. I knowit's likely to be cloudy, but the sightis one I've never seen. I...
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Zeke...I'm afraid I can find few nits to pick and will leave that to those with greater insight in that area.I just wanted to pop in to say that I was yanked in immediately by the subject. I truly...
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Just curious why you use hyphens instead of the emdash.There's ambiguity in this line with your pronoun:Five planets share the evening sky tonight -this chance, they say, will last a week or...
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Zeke, how did I miss this? I'll be kicking myself all the way into 2016. The sonnet is a treat, bumps 'n' all, but I do wish you would smooth out those final feet. It's choppy throughout, but I take...
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Mary - assuming it's lumpy on purpose is very kind of you, but in this case unwarranted. I have a long commute. I try to write a sonnet on the way to work and email it to my wife when I tell her I...
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Only to say that I did stay out with a clear view of the Western horizon tonight as suggested; nothing to report except that my weather vane is down.(April Fools!)I'll add that your adherence to a...
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